Sunday, March 20, 2016

Writing:poetry T1

Walt use personification and metaphors to creat pictures for our readers.

Personification is when you talk or write about an object as if it was a person.

A metaphor is when you say an object is something it is not and then you tell us why you think it is like that.


Something I need to work on is the difference between its and it's.

Something I did well was my full stops and punctuation.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Writing Term 1: Recount

WALT: Use a variety of sentences forms to grab and hold the readers attention.
WALT: Use punctuation correctly at the beginning and end of sentences.
I think I need to work on punctuation and  using order words.
I think I did good words and key phrases.